It's okay, but I find the melody too repetive. Is there any chords in the background music? I don't think so (but I'm sure), so you should ad that. I also think the cymbals are way too loud, if you're gonna have loud cymbals, make the rest of the song chaotic (like Lit Fuse), or else it won't work very well. But the melody is catchy and nice so good work :D